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corey mcdermith

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Iliad

    i have to say i am a little confused about the whole thing. Is he a cat that turned into a chicken that thinks he's a human? If so, then ...

    Apr 10, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Gate of Glendon- Prologue

    alright, here it goes. i think it was jsut right with its length and description of teh characters and all such rot. it had a few errors here adn there, ...

    Mar 31, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Darkness Within

    it was an all around good story. the only real problems were all of the "the's" but you fixed that, adn it does need to be spaced. try putting a ...

    Mar 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: alone

    alright. prior viewers might not have liked it, but i think it has good meaning to it. granted, it doesn't have the structure a poem needs, but who cares. i ...

    Mar 27, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: My Master, my Lover.

    incredible job. i am impressed by your ability to write. i am not exactly what one would call a professional, but i know a good book when i see one, ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Purple Lipstick on my Collar (UPDATED 5/15)

    this was quite a story. i have to ask, how long didi it take you to write all of this? i triy t write alot, but i never have teh ...

    Mar 13, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Daughter of the Sun and the Son of the Moon

    WOW! this was one of the few stories that have ever made me cry. i like thee mixture of natural events with the feelings of the Supernatural. it was one ...

    Mar 7, 2008


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